He tried to save the fallen girls, but they came after him instead.

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"Look, Shirakawa, you're just being biased towards her." Maki was being a bit unreasonable.

That scene just now made Maki quite jealous.

She just wants to stand on a moral high ground and vent her negative emotions.

Even though I was with Shirakawa last night...

Why does he still care so much about Nikaido and get so close to her?

What's so good about this violent woman?

Shirakawa could also vaguely sense the change in Maki's emotions.

Sakura was also a little sullen, and Nikaido was clearly bowing his head in self-reproach.

The atmosphere had almost reached freezing point.

We need to come up with a solution.

“Um, Maki-nee, come with me for a bit, let’s talk alone,” Shirakawa said.

171. The Holy Sword is Tempered! I will become stronger!

Shirakawa and Maki arrived outside the men's and women's restrooms on the first floor. The models on the first floor were having a photoshoot, and there was no one coming or going in the corridor.

Shirakawa, dressed in a hero's uniform, leaned against the wall, fiddling with the ends of his hair, pondering how to explain things to Maki.

Maki, dressed in an elegant princess gown and wearing royal white gloves, with her long hair styled in a bun, stood in the middle of the corridor, waiting for Shirakawa to speak.

"Maki, let me first talk about the problem with your script. Let me clarify that I absolutely did not favor Nikaido. Please let me finish."

"Okay, you say."

Shirakawa quickly glanced through the script in his hand and pointed out a few key issues: "First of all, the biggest problem with your script is that the character of the hero is too unlikable."

"Huh? I heard from Sakura that there are many TV dramas and idol dramas with villains as the main characters, so that shouldn't be a problem."

“A TV series is a TV series, and a stage play is a stage play. You can’t generalize. If you wrote this hero’s story in such a disgusting way from the beginning, the audience will lose interest in watching it,” Shirakawa explained.

If even a hero is like this, who would still hope that he will defeat the evil dragon? Everyone would rather he die on the way.

"So that means we need to change the hero's character design?"

"No need to change anything. We can put the hero's sinister side at the end and create a plot twist. Wouldn't that be more appealing?"

Maki mused.

"What I mean is that you first write that the hero is quite upright on the surface, then intersperse some of his lewd little actions and expressions in the middle, and finally expose his true nature in the battle with the evil dragon, betraying Jackie and Nikaido who have been following him. Writing it this way will leave suspense in the early stage, and the audience will continue to watch with questions such as 'Why does this hero seem a bit strange, a bit evil and abnormal?'"

"I understand what you're saying, but what about Nikaido's role..."

"Regarding this, I absolutely did not favor her. I genuinely felt that Nikaido should not have left the team at this time. An adventure story with three people is easier to write and more interesting than an adventure story with two people," Shirakawa explained sincerely.

"I see." Maki nodded repeatedly.

Shirakawa's explanation was very logical and reasonable. Maki herself hadn't studied screenwriting much before, but after hearing his explanation, she felt that the viewing experience was indeed much better.

“Besides, Nikaido and I have a really good relationship, you know. We used to sit in front of and behind each other. When I first came to the school, she took good care of me. If I suddenly asked her to slap me, she definitely wouldn’t be able to accept it.” Shirakawa continued to explain, “Actually, none of us are professional actors, including me. I haven’t performed much, and I haven’t written any scripts. I’m really sorry for questioning you so much in the dance studio and making you feel awkward.” Shirakawa bowed sincerely.

"It's okay, I didn't write this part well either."

"Well, in that case, let's all work together to get to know each other and build good relationships. Don't take the boss too seriously..."

"So, between Nikaido and me, who are you closest to?" Maki asked, raising an eyebrow slightly.

"It's definitely you!" Bai Chuan had mastered the art of smooth talk from a scumbag, and now he was quite adept at charming girls. "She's just my boss. No matter how good our relationship is, we're just friends. How can she compare to you?"

"Really?" Maki asked.

"Really, really, I swear on my honor!"

Shirakawa once again resorted to his cheap personality.

“Okay,” Maki glanced around the corridor to make sure no one was passing by, then slowly lifted her skirt, holding the hem of her dress.

The white lining inside looked even more delicate.

Her eyes seemed to sparkle with love as she looked at Shirakawa, and the little snake stretched out slightly: "Shirakawa, I can grant you all your requests. You can change it however you want. However, you have to fulfill my request first."

This girl is hopeless...

Maki had been looking for an opportunity to be alone with Shirakawa, and unexpectedly, she actually got it by sheer chance.

She never expected that her outburst would create an opportunity for her and Shirakawa to be alone together.

Now I can finally continue the happy moments I didn't finish this morning.

Shirakawa knew that only by completely seducing and satisfying Maki here would she obediently listen to him and stop causing trouble.

"Okay, but there are people all here, and we don't have a place to sit."

Maki winked at the women's restroom next door.

......

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Inside the compartment.

Maki leaned against the wall, her body slightly swaying. Her fair shoulders were flushed red, and her long, black hair, styled in a bun, made her back view appear even more noble and glamorous.

This seemingly perfect "princess" was now lifting her skirt with both hands, standing on tiptoe, and leaning against the wall of the toilet stall.

She closed her eyes and focused all her attention on the tactile sensations; her body was fully ready to accept Xiaobai.

With a flick of his finger, Shirakawa slid down the lining, revealing her smooth, white skin to the air.

Maki felt a chill run down her spine.

Looking at the somewhat broken and deranged Maki, Shirakawa racked his brains but couldn't figure out where he had gone wrong, how he had managed to save those heroines who should have fallen into depravity and turn them into this state.

"Shirakawa, hurry up, I'm so cold, I want to warm up."

Maki, holding her long skirt under her armpits, tiptoed, turned her head slightly, and blushed.

I long for a shy peony.

Bai Chuan drew his sword.

The hero's holy sword slashed into the princess's shield, but just like before, the sword got stuck and could not be swung any further.

Despite the water attribute bonus, each attack was still insufficient against Maki's resilient shield.

If Shirakawa's attack power is 30, then Maki's shield has a defense power of 50.

A moment later, the hero and the princess both went to the cloud peak, but this time they only took a few deep breaths and finished quickly.

Wait a minute, Shirakawa observed his good friend.

He hasn't been getting proper rest lately, constantly having sex with various girls, and his loyal "brother" is simply unable to get an erection anymore.

No wonder I couldn't perform well in the car last night; it turns out I'm already past my prime.

The sharpness and duration of the Holy Sword made even him feel a little ashamed.

Maki pursed her lips. This time, the cloud palace was too fast, and its height was far from enough.

Seeing that the little Shirakawa had finished, she could only reluctantly lift the lining of her dress.

Although Maki likes Shirakawa, this time...

She sighed silently to herself, not wanting to say anything more, for fear of hurting Shirakawa's pride.

Maybe a few days of rest will make me feel better.

Just as Maki was getting ready, Shirakawa, feeling somewhat ashamed, suddenly thought of a serious problem.

In the otaku comics or games he'd read, there were many tropes where the victim was weak and incompetent, lacking the necessary abilities, and ultimately defeated by the blond otaku who could achieve victory in one fell swoop...

Shirakawa himself didn't realize that the images of the saintess nun and Akiyama Yayoi flashed through his mind in an instant.

Looking at Maki's unsatisfied expression, as if she still wants more, it's just like the prelude to those eroge heroines in manga being with a minotaur.

Looking at his fragile holy sword again, he felt a sudden wave of fear for some reason.

If it's really because of this kind of ridiculous plot that only appears in doujinshi, and I've been turned into some muscle-bound blond guy or a NTR...

It's not impossible, is it?

Besides, I've transmigrated into a pornographic world; such a thing could really happen, right...?

No!

A man can't be impotent!

Absolutely, absolutely, that must not happen.

He had already rescued her from Yayoi Akiyama, but because he was impotent, he absolutely could not accept any further trouble.

Maki wiped herself away regretfully, but the heat in her body had not subsided at all.

Although it wasn't satisfactory, Shirakawa had already tried his best, and he couldn't ask for too much...

"Maki-nee, I'm fine, please wait a moment," Shirakawa said abruptly.

"Okay." Maki leaned against the wall again, but this time her enthusiasm and anticipation were much lower than the first time.


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